You're photos are getting better all the time. I really enjoy the energy of them. There's also a strong contrast running throughout most of your work that's really eye catching. The event pictures are the most interesting to me, getting these people in action is really crucial. In photos like five where they are more passive and posing it doesn't work as well. Especially if your theme is still centered around the frat experience and how chaotic it is. I want to say that for picture 2 but it makes me laugh so I don't want to knock it now.
Your theme has really developed a lot since the last time I looked at your photos. They all work really well together and show a good variety of aspects from pledging your fraternity. They really work well to tell a story.
It seems as though you are beginning to really capture a strong narrative in your photographs. To me, they identify the embodiment of life in a fraternity and college life more generally. You have successfully integrated yourself, as photographer, into the photos as well which I feel adds to the authenticity of moments captured. As Josh mentioned in critique, your technical skills are really outstanding. I am excited to see what you bring to critique this Friday. :)
You're photos are getting better all the time. I really enjoy the energy of them. There's also a strong contrast running throughout most of your work that's really eye catching. The event pictures are the most interesting to me, getting these people in action is really crucial. In photos like five where they are more passive and posing it doesn't work as well. Especially if your theme is still centered around the frat experience and how chaotic it is. I want to say that for picture 2 but it makes me laugh so I don't want to knock it now.
ReplyDeleteYour theme has really developed a lot since the last time I looked at your photos. They all work really well together and show a good variety of aspects from pledging your fraternity. They really work well to tell a story.
ReplyDeleteIt seems as though you are beginning to really capture a strong narrative in your photographs. To me, they identify the embodiment of life in a fraternity and college life more generally. You have successfully integrated yourself, as photographer, into the photos as well which I feel adds to the authenticity of moments captured. As Josh mentioned in critique, your technical skills are really outstanding. I am excited to see what you bring to critique this Friday. :)
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