Your photographs are always very fun and playful. You have a lovely sense of humor. I think your strongest photos are number two and number nine. The content has a complex narrative to them and even more so you composition in these photographs are very clear and focused.
Firstly, I have to give you major props for the kid on a leash picture. It's too bad there's that old guy behind the kid, he's a bit distracting. Other than that, you have a strong composition here. After today's critique I can really see the gimmicky subjects you're trying to capture. It's definitely a very present feature in this state and I can see you really having fun with it. Nice work.
I love the humorous and quirky aspects to your photos. The second photo would have to be my favorite. The smiling figurine pointing with it's abnormally arm to the food sign is hilarious. The photo with the parent keeping their child on the leash is also very funny because of the tension between parent and child. The exposure on all these photos is great, as well as the tonal ranges. The ninth photo is technically sound. The focus on the child also captures the lighthearted mood of the event itself because of the child's amused expression.
i think the ones in crowds are very fun to look at, especially the break dancer guy and the one with mother and child. those feel like moments captured in a flurry of people and time and commotion. the what the fork one has a odd feel to me, maybe the subject matter, i am not sure if i should be looking at the truck or the girl, or just how it was composed. the overall 10 photos i can see are starting to fit into your theme though!
The third image is humorous in that a the child is tending to the needs of an unidentified smaller child, simulating the stereotypical attention mothers have for caring for their newly born (taking them everywhere as well). The lamppost helps distribute the blacks evenly into thirds in the image as well as focus our attention to the children.
Your photographs are always very fun and playful. You have a lovely sense of humor. I think your strongest photos are number two and number nine. The content has a complex narrative to them and even more so you composition in these photographs are very clear and focused.
ReplyDeleteFirstly, I have to give you major props for the kid on a leash picture. It's too bad there's that old guy behind the kid, he's a bit distracting. Other than that, you have a strong composition here. After today's critique I can really see the gimmicky subjects you're trying to capture. It's definitely a very present feature in this state and I can see you really having fun with it. Nice work.
ReplyDeleteI love the humorous and quirky aspects to your photos. The second photo would have to be my favorite. The smiling figurine pointing with it's abnormally arm to the food sign is hilarious. The photo with the parent keeping their child on the leash is also very funny because of the tension between parent and child. The exposure on all these photos is great, as well as the tonal ranges. The ninth photo is technically sound. The focus on the child also captures the lighthearted mood of the event itself because of the child's amused expression.
ReplyDeletei think the ones in crowds are very fun to look at, especially the break dancer guy and the one with mother and child. those feel like moments captured in a flurry of people and time and commotion. the what the fork one has a odd feel to me, maybe the subject matter, i am not sure if i should be looking at the truck or the girl, or just how it was composed. the overall 10 photos i can see are starting to fit into your theme though!
ReplyDeleteThe third image is humorous in that a the child is tending to the needs of an unidentified smaller child, simulating the stereotypical attention mothers have for caring for their newly born (taking them everywhere as well). The lamppost helps distribute the blacks evenly into thirds in the image as well as focus our attention to the children.
ReplyDeleteI definitely see your theme here. The angle of the 6th photo seems purposeful and really emphasizes the action thats taking place by the man.
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